tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post1831141561003860507..comments2024-01-02T06:39:28.476-06:00Comments on erica and christy-two moms. two teachers. two writers. one blog.: I Can't Believe I Wrote That (part I)erica and christyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13074820593371226159noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-39182558688682918172011-09-10T12:05:34.057-05:002011-09-10T12:05:34.057-05:00Oh,
I like the new look of your blog.Oh,<br /><br />I like the new look of your blog.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-25168622883488572942011-09-10T12:05:05.807-05:002011-09-10T12:05:05.807-05:00HI, E,
Ahem.... Ah, I don't know what to say....HI, E,<br /><br />Ahem.... Ah, I don't know what to say. Ah, hmmm. Ah, nice to be back. No, Ericanator in these examples. Only one word comes to mined. It begins with an M----r. Fill in the blanks.<br /><br />As for me, well, you remember my twentieth draft of Amber? Need I say more.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-74212633287258737142011-09-10T02:22:12.191-05:002011-09-10T02:22:12.191-05:00Oh, everything I write is pure gold.
*SNORT*Oh, everything I write is pure gold.<br /><br />*SNORT*Karen M. Petersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972093977468313631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-7731940572317895022011-09-09T10:46:01.637-05:002011-09-09T10:46:01.637-05:00So great! Thanks so much for sharing these. They m...So great! Thanks so much for sharing these. They make me feel better. The other day I wrote, "I cover my hand with my mouth." Um, wrong way round maybe? This is why we all need critique partners and editors! :) And I won't even start on my pre-teen books ... they are a highly concentrated form of melodrama and there's a reason they're IN THE CLOSET FOREVER. lol.<br /><br />AmyA.L. Sonnichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-18077586237242479482011-09-08T15:14:11.663-05:002011-09-08T15:14:11.663-05:00This was cute~ thanks for sharing. I've got to...This was cute~ thanks for sharing. I've got tons of things that make your story look like Shakespeare :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121018905141253640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-55864244374228019172011-09-08T11:03:34.269-05:002011-09-08T11:03:34.269-05:00LOL! Oh I have a ton of them. Don't feel bad, ...LOL! Oh I have a ton of them. Don't feel bad, we all go back over old writing and cringe. ;)Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-63546856234684625472011-09-08T09:59:24.870-05:002011-09-08T09:59:24.870-05:00Ha ha ha ha! My first drafts are littered with the...Ha ha ha ha! My first drafts are littered with these.Alicia Gregoirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06660125614529633284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-29707742867615921102011-09-08T08:58:23.350-05:002011-09-08T08:58:23.350-05:00That was awesome. Thanks for your bravery. I am ...That was awesome. Thanks for your bravery. I am still sometimes guilty of having body parts do things independently. We have read plenty of that kind of prose, so it sticks in our minds. We have to work hard to get that stuff out.<br /><br />How cool that you now recognize how truly awful it was!Vicki Tremperhttp://www.vbtremper.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-38598611736343008302011-09-08T06:43:01.378-05:002011-09-08T06:43:01.378-05:00LOL- thanks so much for sharing these. The runnin...LOL- thanks so much for sharing these. The running one especially had me scratching my head. Oh, with my first MS I was a huge fan of reflextive pronouns. Everyone was always 'finding themselves' 'found myself walking' 'found herself thinking' Even- 'found herself finding' !!!I know.Creepy Query Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18115161057496086972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-88936267252445304842011-09-08T06:03:17.098-05:002011-09-08T06:03:17.098-05:00It's fun to look back and see how much we'...It's fun to look back and see how much we've improved!Laura Paulinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06503090226508079501noreply@blogger.com