tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post6079459917525771164..comments2024-01-02T06:39:28.476-06:00Comments on erica and christy-two moms. two teachers. two writers. one blog.: Our Co-writing Journey (Part three of three): The Queryerica and christyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13074820593371226159noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-69918788041876685112012-12-28T13:16:21.210-06:002012-12-28T13:16:21.210-06:00The premise is definitely interesting. I know you ...The premise is definitely interesting. I know you mentioned mystery but by the time I was done reading? I was thinking "thriller" too.<br />Good luck with revision.Akosshttp://akossiwaketoglo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-53488128542789701102012-12-12T16:57:03.515-06:002012-12-12T16:57:03.515-06:00I MUST READ THIS SEND IT NOW OMG.
Seriously. I am...I MUST READ THIS SEND IT NOW OMG.<br /><br />Seriously. I am totally up for it if you are. Abductions, corrupt cops, a trail of text messages and blog comments — it has it all! I know I am basically the WORST blog stalker ever (because I lurk! I lurk! what is wrong with me?) but yes. I am a pretty good reader, yo. If you send me 30 pages I will be all over them like the cat's meow.<br /><br /><3Mia Haysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01041441666482084762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-37241024682316851472012-12-12T10:11:58.804-06:002012-12-12T10:11:58.804-06:00Hmmm... I could do some critting, but I'd need...Hmmm... I could do some critting, but I'd need to do a test run of 3 chapters before committing to more, so let me know if you're interested. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-13644899893276351262012-12-11T23:49:15.347-06:002012-12-11T23:49:15.347-06:00Hi, ladies..... SURPRISE!
It's been WAY TOO L...Hi, ladies..... SURPRISE!<br /><br />It's been WAY TOO LONG! I see you two have been quite busy. I really like the premise of you new novel Great character names. I kind of agree with Margo.<br /><br />I hope all is well with both of you. I'll try and drop you an email when I get a free moment.<br /><br />HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!!!Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-826563616111732402012-12-11T10:27:57.601-06:002012-12-11T10:27:57.601-06:00This is a fun query! Right away though I want to k...This is a fun query! Right away though I want to know more about Goon and some hints of how the Nea-Goon team might be unique! Capitalize on your characters and less on the plot. All you really need to share in a query about the plot is the hook, conflict and the stakes. Maybe less about the government and "man-made world" just confused me. I liked the line about the vans with the VIPER license plate!Margo Berendsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03476308235642890474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-67689048332560846652012-12-11T06:08:00.710-06:002012-12-11T06:08:00.710-06:00Alright, you win:) If you still need CP's I ca...Alright, you win:) If you still need CP's I can take a look for you. I am also a co-author so I know a little about the give and take of the relationship and how much work it takes to make sure the voices are seamless. <br /><br />Trisha<br />pleaver@vigorpc.com<br /> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10736441732672508192noreply@blogger.com