tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post6914885893773110308..comments2024-01-02T06:39:28.476-06:00Comments on erica and christy-two moms. two teachers. two writers. one blog.: My hook...or is it?erica and christyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13074820593371226159noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3804696485095159380.post-66750948844261417572010-07-19T13:31:12.416-05:002010-07-19T13:31:12.416-05:00Your lead made me wonder about the dark-haired, de...Your lead made me wonder about the dark-haired, deep-voiced character. Who is he and what special abilities does he possess? What will happen between this character and Dawn? And that is the purpose of a lead...to draw in the reader. Leave the reader something to wonder about and give him/her a purpose for reading. You nailed it!<br /><br />And now, for Fun Word Letdown...<br />"The inability to use the word macerate in a thriller exacerbated my exasperation.Ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13942465011996690466noreply@blogger.com