First Page Critique

Christy submitted her first page of 27 DAISIES (YA Contemporary) for a First Impressions Critique today. Please hop over and check it out if you have time! (links below)

These two lovely ladies host a First Impressions (first page critique) on their blogs each month to give writers feedback.  They invite their readers to leave suggestions in the comments. (Read their side bars to learn how to submit your first page for next month's First Impressions!)

Dianne Salerni @ In High Spirits
Marcy S. Hatch @ Maine Words

Hope you are having a fabulous new year! So far so good for Erica and Christy.  We are home from school today since it's too cold to venture out.  Here in Wisconsin it's at about -40 with the wind chill!  That's why I'm snuggling my coffee by the fire place today and working on revising 27 DAISIES! 

Stay warm!

~Christy