This Week in My World

-I’m at 7,000 words for my new novel.
-I haven’t critiqued anybody else’s work.
-I just read my first blogs.
-I started reading a Janet Evanovich novel. Not YA, I know.
-I learned that all the boxes I packed during the first week of summer to move from one building in my school district to another, will now be moved back. I’m switching buildings and grade levels just a few days before the new year begins.
-My allergies have been beyond annoying. Consequently, I’ve been beyond wiped out and have slept for a few hours each afternoon. Not productive. Fortunately, my kids have been exhausted right along with me and actually took naps for the first time in what seems like forever.
-I finally wiped up my floors. And cleaned toilets.
-I gave up and bought box meals for the kids to eat. Or not. But at least the prep time was 40 seconds, not 40+ minutes. I had peanut butter toast. And a glass of wine.
-That’s it.
-Happy weekend. And for you fellow teachers-Happy New Year!

Relaxation

I have nothing of interest to report, not that I have in the past. Not that I'm ever writing to anyone besides myself. A journal, more than a blog, I guess.

So far the weekend has been a weekend of indulgences. Last night my husband and I watched the movie Ghostwriter and enjoyed it. Today, instead of wiping up my grotesquely gritty floors I read,and finished, Linger. In between chapters I slept, got food for my children, changed diapers, picked up toys, and...that's about it.

I finished the book, moments ago, and am full. Fully content, fully satisfied with the story, character and writing. Full with a familiar feeling of sadness at its completion, the finality of turning a novel's last lonely page. Full of aniticipation for the third novel that I'll have to wait until next summer to crack open and indulge in.

Dinner menu: teriyaki steak, potatoes, carrots %succesfulness: 75% (one child, having had no nap, conked out, midplay, on the living room floor before making it to the dinner table...this has never happened before. Dinner was delish. He really missed out, poor thing!

Oh yes, I mean, Oh NO...not another ADVERB!

Adverbs...avoid them. Why? To SHOW and not tell. Let's practice. Why? I need to.

She ran quickly around the lake.
She sped around the lake. (See, the adverb was not really needed.)

She laughed loudly.
She guffawed.

(See...use a more specific verb. Word choice. Less repetition. Repetition is bad. It's why my manuscript was 116,000 words. When I'm pretty sure it would be better at 80,000.)

She shrugged apologetically.
Wanna help me with this one?

Lesson of today: revise and lose the adverbs.
TTFN

Dinner Menu for tonight: PIZZA NIGHT % of successfulness: TBD

I have a new PROTAGONIST!

Sadly, I am taking a break from Dawn, Lawrence and the gang. Their revisions were giving me headaches so I needed something fresh. Just for a little bit. I promised myself I would never forget them and will make sure their story is completed to my satisfaction someday. I will.

BUT. Last night I started a new novel. I am several thousand words in and LOVE IT! It's not fantasyish so I am having zero mental block issues. AND I learned something that I took with me to this new novel. I wrote my queryinfo (not a real word) first. SO when I finish it, I won't get sidetracked/bogged down/fixated on any extraneous information/details/conflicts.

SO.

I'D LIKE TO INTRODUCE:

Shelby Harris
Seventeen year old with crappy friends just looking for her place to fit in
a midst people who don't like her for who she is
while holding fast to who she wants to be
learning that there is always more
to learn about oneself

I REALLY LIKE HER AND ONLY WISH IT WOULD BE SET UP FOR A SERIES SO I DON'T HAVE TO SAY GOODBYE AT THE END. of my new YA contemporary romance novel.

maybe someone else will like her too (y'know like and agent...or a publisher...and eventually the ya reading public!!!! there i go getting ahead of myself again.

off to write chapter 5. ttfn

Dinner Menu: leftover chicken stirfry, mini cakes w/whipped cream, strawberries and blueberries
% of successfulness: 65% (adults only plus a little chicken and a little dessert)

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And even if you don't (I think you should), who IS your favorite fictional character? I'd love to know.

COMMENTS, ANYONE????