9.28.2011

campaigner challenge number 2: LAYERS OF IMAGO

The second campaigner challenge starts September 22 and ends October 3. 


Mine is #158:  LAYERS OF IMAGO
The Challenge is:
Write a blog post in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, whether flash fiction, non-fiction, humorous blog musings, poem, etc. The blog post should:
  • include the word "imago" in the title
  • include the following 4 random words: "miasma," "lacuna," "oscitate," "synchronicity,"
If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional and included in the word count), make reference to a mirror in your post.
For those who want an even greater challenge (optional), make your post 200 words EXACTLY!
The very first Campaigner's blog I visited had this:

Glossary:
Imago: Insect in its sexually mature adult stage after metamorphosis.
Miasma: Noxious atmosphere.
Lacuna: A gap or space.
Oscitate: Gape or Yawn.
Synchronicity: Events that happen together by chance


AND I AM IN LOVE WITH HER FOR IT. PLEASE VISIT AND FOLLOW: ANGELA'S CHEERIOS AND PEARLS NECKLACE STORIES BLOG

Here's Christy's Entry:

BTW, I ACTUALLY FOLLOWED ALL THE RULES!
 I INCLUDED ALL THE WORDS.
AND I WROTE IT IN EXACTLY 200 WORDS. 
(I'VE NEVER DONE THAT BEFORE!!!!!)

LAYERS OF IMAGO


The miasma leaves billions of imago dead. The ground looks snow-covered. I’ve seen pictures of the last snowfall, The Blizzard of 2015, so I can say for certain. The one box I have from the Old Life holds a few of those, kept carefully hidden in the lacuna of my hillside home. If any of the Units found out I hadn’t handed the pictures, mirrors and other mementos over to be burned, I’d be thrown into the Lake of the Dead. I figure the day that happens will be the day of the Trials anyway. 
I believe wholly in synchronicity. Isn’t that what happened the day the Old Life ended? Newspaper clippings in my box tell all about the volcanoes, earthquakes, tsunamis, and fires. Articles tell all about when they obliterated three-fourths of the world, leaving only the Few. 
It’s too bad Judgment hadn’t had more common sense on who made up the Few. In my opinion, the majority of us are the most ruthless, barbaric, and greedy of all Livingkind. We adapt to our environment, sure, but what good is that when we kill each other off at a faster rate than the miasma or oscitated earth ever could?

21 comments:

  1. Wow. And unfortunately this doesn't have to be 2015. It can be looked upon as a mirror of today. Awesome.

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  2. Awesome story - it kept me engrossed to the end and hoping for more! Now I want to know how exactly the Old Life ended - all those natural disasters, yikes!

    I love how you incorporated all the required words. Fantastic.

    Thank you for such a sweet comment on my post. I'm glad I helped with my glossary :-)

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  3. Such a grim state of affiars our future holds in this world. You did an awesome job painting this ominous setting.

    Great job! :)

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  4. Holy crap, christy! I'm sorry I ever told you not to go dystopian/sci-fi. You're a natural!! (and I'm a little in love with Angela now, too - she's totally helpful!)
    erica

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  5. Fantastic entry for the challenge. Impressive. And yes, that glossary was helpful ;)

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  6. You've done a lot of world building in 200 words. Great effort! I didn't even notice the challenge words, so you slipped them in brilliantly!
    Mine is #3.

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  7. Oooh, this was powerful and bleak, and very well done!

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  8. Like the others I totally oscitated over this story! It was that good.

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  9. You did a great job on this. I'd love to see more of this story!

    I'm No. 44.

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  10. Wow. I keep wondering what's going to happen in this story.

    Love the new look, by the way. :-)

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  11. Very intriguing flash, wanted to read more! ; )

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  12. Excellent job at establishing a very bleak world. I love this sentence,"It’s too bad Judgment hadn’t had more common sense on who made up the Few." It says so much.

    Now excuse me while I hijack your thread for a second.... Erica!! We seem to follow each other around the internet. Didn't I have the entry right after yours in last year's WriteOnCon, and now my entry is the one after you and Christy in this challenge. Hope you're doing well!

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  13. Excellent job! This was no easy task, and you did it!

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  14. This is a vivid look at a bleak world. Love the feel you've created for it - and in 200 words. Great!

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  15. More...please :) Wow, you really painted a visual. Bravo!

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  16. Very grim picture ... gloom and doom ... you did a great job with the words !
    My entry at no.#185

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  17. Awesome! I got a very vivid picture!

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  18. Absolutely stunning imagery. It's amazing how clear a picture you paint of your world in only 200 words. I'm impressed!

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  19. What a great way to use those words. I really like how you write.

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  20. Fantastic word usage; micro fiction; and candid reality. Great job.

    #188

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  21. Fantastic! Love the way this could be an entire book on its own. Great job Christy!

    jessica aspen
    #174

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